1. Is there a clear point of view? (position)
Yes, it is clear that you are for alternative energy source, and want to lessen Amercian dependence on oil and other enviromentally unfriendly energy sources.

2. Does the Op-Ed state the problem and solution simply?
Both the problem and solution are simply stated. I would add more analysis to make them even stronger though.

3. Does the piece address the counter arguments?
Yes! You did a really good job of that, especially with acknowledging the initial expense of alternate energy sources.

4. Is the Op-Ed interesting?
Yes, especially for someone who is interested in investing in alternate energy sources. The story is current because it is a present concern of the United States.

5. Are the paragraphs organized logically?
You did a good job of breaking them down into different ideas. I might rearrange them so that negatives come at the beginning and then you finish by stating the positives.

6. Does each paragraph develop an idea to support the thesis?
Yes they all revolve around the idea that alternate energy is necessary, and action must be taken.

7. Is the writing clear?
The writing is very easy to understand, which made your point clear. To strengthen your overall writing try to take out phrases like "such as" and instead make your writing flow right into an example.